- Have more moments, share looks between characters, think about where you are directing your lines.
- singing gives a good atmosphere, same as violin.
- is the violin an act of defiance? -
-establish relationship between Benedick and Beatrice quicker.
- make intention and thought process clearer (how difficult the situation is seeing as he is supposed to be hated)
- scene needs to flow better when sorting shoes, have it already starting before audience reaches the room.
- show the belittling between officers and how Benedick embarrasses Joanna.
- show more love when Ursula dies, she gave Benedick love and warmth, when it is forbidden, when she dies this shows benedick's emotional attachment to her.
- play with the idea of travelling around to give more time.
Props use:
- use wooden coat hangers
- use more older looking props
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