Friday, 4 April 2014

Pedra's Death

- sorted out scene text and have an idea of how to make each character's status through quietness and stillness. 
- we have 2 examples (on Daisy's blog) of the same scene in different tones. 

I am found as Pedra, dead on the floor after the Sonderkommando has killed me. We changed the second one to have more stillnesses and make James' speech calmer to show an inner rage that slowly builds. 

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